Get used to dissapointment.
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Not me? Who? Not now? When?
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Though it’s hard to picture this as a life memoir it does say a lot. If I’m not mistaken, it has to do with your exclusion and perhaps others getting credit at unforeseen and spontaneous times? It was an interesting memoir, and unique enough. Good job. (it could be a little more clear)
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i dont see how this could be a memoir. not very fun to read.
What? Was? This? Suppose? To Mean?
The ever consuming musing of a person who seeks acceptance and recognition within their society. I think you speak for everyone on this planet when you write who and when in your quote. Everyone needs to be accepted, needed, and most importantly loved. Great quote.
“In this life, there are always more questions than answers”
Def applies to your entry. What could it be able? Falling in love or death even being born . :]
This isnt a bad piece… but it’s rather hackneyed and cliched (these are actually lyrics to a Papa Roach song and are a pretty well known saying). To win the competition you’re really going to need to go for originality.
this one i feel. and it actually has writer implications
It is too bad that there is a six word limit, as I would have liked to see you explore all of the questions here: who, what, where, when, why, how. Come to think of it, those are six words right there! :)
One of the best I’ve read thus far. Poignant. Well done.
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