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6 words cannot describe my thankfulness

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September 04, 2008

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August 05, 2008

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The irony is that saying six words can’t describe your thankfulness (or more precisely, gratitude) is describing it.  You’ve just suggested that you have an immense amount of gratitude!  That’s a description.  In that sense, you prove yourself wrong immediately.  Perhaps you mean something different than ‘describe?’  Maybe, ‘encompass’ or ‘contain’?   Be more precise and careful with your word choice and you’ll see the possibilities increase exponentially.  Good luck.

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August 04, 2008

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First, I completely understand the sentiment you are trying to convey.  However, this really feels like copping out.  This sort of tautology, this just seems like you couldn’t boil your thanks down to six words, but went ahead and submitted this for the six word exercise regardless.

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