Poetry / His Glory Surrounding

Father thank you
for the sun’s warmth
to our soul in your Holy Spirit
Father blessings
before me this I known
there of my heart
whispers of love from the Angels comforting thee
Father of Time
And of spirit above
Truth of my father God’s Grace that is everlasting.

Copyrighted 2006 By Feon Davis

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April 05, 2007

Deleted User

Review of Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

This is a very good poem.  I like the part about the angels and father time.  Very good.

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April 06, 2007

alco

REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats

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15	78.6% (14 votes)	47.4%

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alco reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

The poem’s message you can’t really disagree with.  

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April 06, 2007

momsgirl2

REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats

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1204	53.0% (198 votes)	23.3%

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43	F	Batesville, AR	April 17

momsgirl2 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like this Christian poetry but you lose me the way you have  line five. It is not wtiten correctly it should say, I have known.

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