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Father thank you
for the sun’s warmth
to our soul in your Holy Spirit
Father blessings
before me this I known
there of my heart
whispers of love from the Angels comforting thee
Father of Time
And of spirit above
Truth of my father God’s Grace that is everlasting.
Copyrighted 2006 By Feon Davis
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The poem’s message you can’t really disagree with.
I like this Christian poetry but you lose me the way you have line five. It is not wtiten correctly it should say, I have known.
April 05, 2007
This is a very good poem. I like the part about the angels and father time. Very good.
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