Humor/Satire / Careful, now... (Analysis)

You too? I returned from the dead all pasted together and decompositional. My work since has been sagging half-rotten from my mind’s own skeletal remains. I’m so relieved someone else can relate.

It might read better if “obituary” were left out completely.

I voted 1 other a ten. You are 2nd.

Instead of dying instantly some of us insane writers and artists hang onto the very last dregs.

I’d be interested as what made this pop into your head.

Short, concise, unique.

Thank you, Gbryan

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August 08, 2008

by LAluver4ever

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Thank you so much. Haha, yes, exactly. I’m not quite sure what made it pop into my head; I was just thinking about how I am when I get really great ideas for writing or art, to the point where I feel like I can’t stop until it’s done.

August 08, 2008

by gbryananderson

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Sorry to say, you are blessed or cursed, with an artist’s soul.

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I can certainly identify with this.  It seems my life revolves around writing.  I go through fits of massive creativity, or fell like I’m going to explode because I’m not writing.  Good work.

Love this, but thought you didn’t need to downplay your talent just cuz you didn’t personally like what you wrote. Shame on you.  Its good.

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August 08, 2008

by LAluver4ever

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Haha, thanks. =]

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Loved this one this is one of the best that I have read .

I think its cool! it could be expanded go a little more into how/why the “explosion” happend or what it became. but dont go to far into it or it could become repetative.