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Ate out love, tasted like heaven.

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cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

August 22, 2008

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hi

i like and get the idea, but i think ate out love is akward and doesn’t seem to fit in all honesty..i think it’s missing a word or two..(i know it’s a 6 word memoir)..but you could make this one more appealing with a didferent chose of words..but again, good idea..work it out better,,,jim

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August 19, 2008

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sexy. but how does it relate to the title?

lilceresita23 avatar General Stranger

August 17, 2008

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FREAKEN AWSOME!!

LOVED IT!

ENJOYED IT!

GENIUS!

GOOOOOOOOD!!!

Souldierpoet avatar General Stranger

August 13, 2008

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ah, it feels like it’s deeper than it sounds.  

Static avatar General Stranger

August 11, 2008

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Hmm, I’m not entirely sure what you mean by this piece and the only link I can see is the mention of heaven, used as a simile. I don’t know if you’re implying (I’m going mostly off the “religion vs. me” title here) that you don’t really see the importance of religion as you use a word that’s so recognisably religious as nothing more than a simile to describe the taste of something you ate. But that’s about the only meaning I can personally glean from it. Also, I’d reconsider the “Ate out Love”. It sounds a little strangely worded to me and I don’t get your meaning. It almost sounds like you’re having a sordid afair with love personified (that was the most intellegent way I could word a rather immature first impression)

However, this piece definately seems to have potential. Good luck!

Enigma28 avatar General Stranger

August 09, 2008

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This is very intersting and definitely one of the better six word memoirs I’ve read. It could be attributed to religion but also love.
Well done
Jodie

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August 08, 2008

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When I eat out of love, though I never thought of it this way, I’d think that I was with a partner, or eating a dinner that I usually shared with someone. I would then think that this relationship is meant to be.

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August 08, 2008

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made me laugh so earned nice score. Good luck.

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August 07, 2008

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This is intriguing but confusing, not exactly sure what is meant by “ate out love” as it is rather ambiguous. If it tasted like heaven, not sure what it has to do with religion in your title, for somehow to my prurient mind the firsts part has a slight sexual connotation also, or a negative connotation, as “ate out” implying ‘depleting’ something. I could be wrong. But I’ve pondered this quite a while and would love to know what you really mean.

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