Quotes / Religion Vs. Me

It’s a bit confusing. “Ate out”- you mean cunnilingus? Otherwise, there might be a better way to phrase this. Also not sure how this ties into religion; it’s more about enjoying the pleasures of life, and that’s not necessarily mutually exclusive with religion.

It’s dirty, funny, and it makes me think. Good job.

Hm, I like this. But not all love is heaven-like. It could send you to heaven through heartbreak, not sure if that’s what you meant.

Kudos.

HA! Nice spiritual twist on physical actions.  Good to know it didn’t taste like chicken. :)

i think its good. It describes religion and love. I think you did a great job potraying your message in 6 words! I think you should change out ate to eat because you are still alive!

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April 06, 2009

by NovemberDisaster

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Ok well.. I am just going to let the other comments answer this.

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This quote is..amazing.
I don’t quite know how to word it otherwise.
It’s very obscene, very profound, and at the same time, very eloquent.
I’m adding this to my favorites.

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March 13, 2009

by NovemberDisaster

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Thank you for your comment. To tell you the truth it took me almost two weeks to come up with this one, it almost seemed like forever.

I am glad you enjoyed it!

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Religion: Zip; You: 40 zillion! I reckon God’s a dyke and there’s no straights let in through the pearly gates, Petra guards the door.

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March 10, 2009

by NovemberDisaster

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I dont know if its your choice of words or just your jargon but that really made me laugh.

March 10, 2009

by Logan

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Well I always call it “being in the lap of luxury” but then again I’m a hedonist. Whatever you’re having yourself.

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I REALLY like this. This is pure, simple poetry. It made me wonder what the writer was thinking or feeling when this was written. This could have multiple meanings depending on how the reader was to portray the meaning or feeling involved.
My only suggestion is to consider changing it to 2 seperate sentences.
  ”Ate out love. Tasted like heaven.”
I think that would make it more dramatic.
Great job!

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March 10, 2009

by NovemberDisaster

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Thank you for your review. Actually I am sure you can get a clear Idea of it from the other comments. Its my little protest. I am Gay, but I believe I am going to heaven. Thats as simple as I can put it.

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Sensual, promiscuous, tasteful…I really like this.  Good luck with it.