Poetry / 6 word memoir #1

Fell on face? Succeeded? Started new? Congrats on the courage! That’s all I can say… nice punctuation.

bravo! if only the rest of us could see the light too…! :)

A feeling of moving on despite what the world lays before you. Breathing deep before you take that step makes you feel as if you getting ready to take a leap or reassuring yourself. Simple.

Very nice. The perfect follow-up I think to one I read earlier: “the blade turned into a pen” Kudos

This didn’t do much for me.  There isn’t much of a story in it.

Hey stranger,

Inspiration. Build up the courage, then execution. Very nicely done.

:)

D.C

When I think I found light, I stepped in the presence of God.
Will you be admired? That is for you to know.
Amuse and entertain God? I wish I could tell God a joke and he’d get it.
Poetry? Yes. Blessings, Gregory

Hmm, an interesting piece. Obviously you (or the protagonist, whoever that may be) is taking a breath as they try and gather the courage to move forward. But usually people need to gather courage to move into the dark, rather than to step out into the light… Although, I’m guessing the “light” here could be metaphorical (like, “the spotlight” or maybe “inspiration” and you need courage to follow your nose and move forward with that inspiration and put yourself out there).

Either way, not a bad memoir! Though, you may want to enter it in the competition while (and if) it’s still open to entries.

Good work