Short Story / Six Word Memoir Third Attempt

OK. This could be taken to mean that the writer was sadly mistaken about his view of life. This could also be taken to mean that the writer wrote about Life, but he should have written about something else. I like the ambiguity.

If you can figure out a way to say this without “Was” (a throwaway verb), it would be much improved.

i read ur piece but i didnt understand why u were sadly mistaken about

this can be interpreted in a number of ways and i think that is a positive attribute.

it could be that your observations while writing about life proved to be sad mistakes once you learned more and looking back you realize how off your perceptions were.

or it could be that you made a sad mistake by trying to write about life in the first place, because you can’t write about life and live life at the same time. if your life was great you wouldn’t care to sit and write it down, you’d simply live it.

LOL, very funny memoir.

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August 08, 2008

by J_Lynn

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