A death sentence at birth, a programmable, biological machine
cast out unto the Earth, torn from the woumb, the sole plan is so obscene
instilled with fear and doubt, rise up among and as one of shattered dreams
an outstretched hand of trust, the parasitic infestation of my mind
the change from love to lust, all from emergence of abuseres so unkind
am I the guilty one, alone I’m cast in shadows, demons claw at me, OH NO!
I feel I’m changing
turning more towards the darkness
I feel I’m changing
the transformation of flesh
with faith I open my heart
with faith I open my soul
with faith I open my life
with I’m open and give you all controll
I feel I’m changing
nothing dies more slowly
I feel I’m changing
or more painfully than dreams
Silence the betrayer(silence the betrayer)
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hi there,
very good, i love the title, it really grabs you, and i like the orginal rhymes you don’t hear, like machine/obscene. i also can relate to the part of turning your life over…for someone else to contol..(i think others can relate too…:) gave you a well deserved “8”...and i hope we both can keep the faith!!!...later,jim
read your lyrics , so hard to say much about em , until you hear the music
but I feel that it has a chance ,
I would add another six line verse to even it out,
but not really nescessary..
kind of sounds like a fleetwood mac kind of tune .
keep at the key board ,
lookingbeyond
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