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I should be the one dead.
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pigpin reviewed Version 1 -
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lmjean3 reviewed Version 1 -
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Even with only 6 words to use, a little vague, why should you be dead, gee we don’t want you dead though! But do you see where I am going with this, let me give a little example, your dead, should have been me. You see what I am saying?? Give it more meaning, more punch and understanding.
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effervescentpsyche reviewed Version 1 -
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That sounds extremely depressing. It definitely would fit a memoir of ones life, and it definitely wants to lead people to know the story behind it. I like it a lot. :)
trouten_m reviewed Version 1 -
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an unfortunate thought that plagues too many people. The fact of the matter is: you’re not the one dead, so either fix the problem (not something I’m recommending) or learn to live again. —Mandy
Siren85 reviewed Version 1 -
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Wow. Powerful words, especially as a memoir. Really makes me wonder what kind of life you’ve led. This is great because it actually makes you think, wonder, dream up little stories about what could have happened. It’s different, good job.
dylanmatthews reviewed Version 1 -
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Thank you. This is a wonderfully written six word memoir. The word choice isn’t too flowery, it is straight to the point and honest. At the same time, it leaves so much to the imagination. Beyond the obvious question of why should you be dead, many others rapidly arise. Well written!
cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 -
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hi there,
well it sounds like a powerful 6 word message, that could mean a tragedy of some sort, like a car accident…or a fast living kund of person..etc. but i am not sure what or how it connects to being a writer, but just a quote on it’s own..it is interesting….jim
miamonster reviewed Version 1 -
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This is both humorous and intriguing when you think about it.
I wonder if this would be written as someone’s memoir or even on a tombstone.
its an interesting F* you to the world, one last stab before you’re forgotten.
keep sharing.
moosetrax15 reviewed Version 1 -
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That statement carries alot of weight. Alot of emotion condensed in six short words. There’s more emotion in that statement than in most paragraphs. Very powerful.
Marvin reviewed Version 1 -
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sounds like someone is carrying around a bit of guilt. strong statement. six words. banana-cream pie.
guilty man still lives. this piece, while dark, is inherently optimistic. the narrator still breathes.
good work.
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