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Lyrics / Brainwashed

On the edge of sanity, people searching for their dreams
running from their problems now, even though they will be found

Haunting figures the DARK surrounds, hearing voices and unknown sounds
in the end you’ll be set free, cuz you’ll lose your sanity

now it’s time for you to die, no more prayers cuz you are mine
in the end you will see, I’m the master of your dreams

Now it’s time for you to realize that you’re living
a total lie in your mind
you try to run you try to hide
even though the pain won’t subside

I don’t know why I’m brainwashed
why can’t someone tell me why
I don’t know why I’m brainwashed
why can’t someone tell me…..
why

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August 16, 2008

cooljim102055

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54	M	Taunton, MA	November 20

cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

i luv the line, running from problems now that later will be found out..(maybe you should say surface though)..you may change the title to “society brainwashed me”..believing in things that are not reall and give examples of them…and don’t wait for the last verse to mention your title..it should be mention early..and often actually..like in a repeating chorus..i think you got a good idea but it needs a little more developing…i hope i have helped more than hurt…:)...later,,jim

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August 12, 2008

hey_sean

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hey_sean reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

The rhythm seemed to stumble for a second at the beginning, then set into a lovely pattern starting at the second line and ending at the fourth. Then it seemed to get a bit jumbled again. This is just me and my rhythm obsession, however.

I think everyone has a feeling of being brainwashed at some point in their life, so as far as relation goes, kudos on the subject.

Only thing that really bothered me was the shortening of the word ‘because’ to ‘cuz’. Due to the fact that ‘cause’ is the emphasized syllable in the word, it doesn’t change the rhythm or flow of the passage.