Humor/Satire / 6 words on how i feel

It’s a very disparaging six words, and they really do emit a mood that a lot people feel from day to day. I think the lowercase I’s really emphasize this mood, as if you (or the one who feels this) is really down and out and just can’t ever make it to the top. I like the lack of punctuation to in the “cant,” even if you didn’t originally intend to do that.

Maybe make the “e” lowercase, too in “Even,” to emphasize the mood even further. It has a childlike quality, too. I really liked it. :)

Just one thing, though… why is it in humor/satire? Not too funny, I would think. ;)

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September 16, 2008

by l13dj13

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thank you… i am glad you like dit… i didnt even realise that i had put in humor and satire… so its not ment to be there at all… thank you for the input

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cliche

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September 14, 2008

by l13dj13

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no its not. where have you ever heard that? if you want to review someones work, review it. dont just give one word, the only reason im not refunidng this is cos its stupid and i dont do it…

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Maybe you can.

A sad and world weary post.

You feel that you are compelled to succeed so you try but can’t seem to get where you want to be. You are not a failure, because you tried. You are not a winner because you failed.

Somedays, that is very true

Awww…feeling down?
Like the quote, good for one of those frustrating depressing days. Capitalize and add a period and your’re good to go!

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September 11, 2008

by l13dj13

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thank you! first constructive review ive recieved on it!

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I understand what you’re saying here, but I felt more depressed when I finished reading this than humored.  Sorry if I missed it.  Maybe this would be better under “Quotes”?  Thanks for sharing!

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August 18, 2008

by l13dj13

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thank you… and i get waht you say… thanks for your honest opinion

xl13dj13x

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This is good because it clearly expresses a feeling of frustration.  Many if not all people can identify with this at some point in their lives.  Good work!

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August 14, 2008

by l13dj13

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thank you!!!!

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