Humor/Satire / 6 words on how i feel

Simple

Very well done.

So try harder, never give up, one day it will rise.

I feel that you have captured what many aspiring writers feel whenever they try to compose literary pieces. An aspiring writer may have the best theme in mind with the details to boot but for some reason the words just won’t come out. This has been my constant frustration as a writer and a scholar.  

I commend you for writing such a fine piece. Perhaps you can try to put a subject to give your piece a holistic feel to it. Perhaps you can try something like: “Tried to write but couldn’t.” By doing so you can give the readers an idea that you were talking about the writing process without even resorting to a title or a header. It can stand by itself that way.

Keep up the good work! =)

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August 18, 2008

by l13dj13

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thank you for the help… i get what you say but i wasnt just tlaking abou writing… its like that with everything in life isnt it?

thank you for your review andyour honest opinion

xl13dj13x

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