Humor/Satire / Benni the Broom

Benni The Broom was oh so icky, especially when spending time with his girlfriend dustball vicky.

Loosing his brissels while sleeping kinda sucked
but didnt hurt worse then getting his eyebrows plucked

Now maybe his job did make him weep, but whos to say anyone else would sweep

That statement would soon be put to the test,For one day soon benni fell ill and needed his rest

Well when the mop found out she threw quite a tantrum, Then she hopped downstairs to watch the phantom

Benni thought the place wasn’t clean, which intern made Benni Very VERY mean

Sp he called a meeting something had to be done “youll help me now or ill be on the run”

Well this must have worked because something happened For Now Benni Could work and forever be Unmatted

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August 20, 2008

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the__Amazon reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I really like this, lol. I could see it in a childrens book, something I’d read to my sister before bedtime.

However, the last word in the piece doesn’t seem to flow. I’d recommend breaking out a Thesaurus and finding one that did :]

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