Poetry / Believe

I can’t believe you love me
My mind strains to understand and my heart resists

I know you love me,
I know it in my head, I feel it in my heart
But I find it hard to believe

I fight against your kindness
But my armored heart grows rusty and weak

I had heard of this thing, but I’d never known it
Fire was more my friend

Dangerous and painful, I would let it platy over my fingertips
Leaving behind its heat and scars, like desire and lies
Things I know about.

Use me, seduce me
Tell me you love me and take it back

I would know the ground beneath my feet then
But I don’t know, I am so uneducated here

Help me to understand

But I do understand

I just don’t believe

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October 25, 2008

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It was pretty good, a little non confusing at parts but i still liked it

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