Poetry / the clocks (Analysis)

“questioning yourself
you’re left your own witness
give it time to run by
like clockwork
you’re breaking down with each pass”

at half-past six
thought you had it
as a fix
instead you’re losing tick
with each minute, you don’t fit
you’re losing yourself
with each hour that you sit
give it time to run by
or open up
and look inside

something’s not right here.

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August 19, 2008

tstone

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kind of an uneasy-feeling poem, summarized well by the last line.  i’m generally not a poem enthusiast, but this held my attention.  why is the 1st part in ””s?

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October 18, 2008

by so_resented_so_disliked

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20	M	Fords, NJ	November 23

thanks for taking the time to read…

i had the beginning part written before and decided to add to it.. almost making sort of two poems in one with the same theme

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August 19, 2008

felixzeak

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