Poetry / poem wars

try 1:

Amber says:
As love comes, It goes, As friends come, They go, As life soon comes, It soon ends.

Prince says:
a soul left to wander the realms for eternity. abandon yet never alone

Amber says:
As never alone, To never meet one soul, As lonely as a rock in a desert.

Prince says:
a rock in the desert shading the poor lizard from the blazing sun, at night left alone only to look forward to the sun rise once again

Amber says:
As soon as the sun rises, The moon falls, Darkness covers the land, Lonely and depressed, Nothing to surpress the darkness.

Prince says:
darkness , a mere lack of light

Prince says:
waiting for the moment that the sun will rise and brighten the lands once again

Amber says:
As the sun comes up, The temerature rises, Water boils, Animals die of dehydration, As if the moon wasnt there at all

Prince says:
but it is the moon that crreps from behind the trees only to bring forth night and once again the cool darkness that shall forever remain in every heart

try 2:

Prince says:
beauty wonderous yet hard to find, the skin so frail and so is the mind. but what is beauty if not the mind, our bodies a shell left for time

Amber says:
As time runs on, Beauty fades, Personality comes to mind, As if a blooming daisy yet to dry

Prince says:
the daisies dry until the soul cries and once again it blooms show the true person that was left behind

Amber says:
As the person was left behind, Nothing but memory, Fades into mind.

Prince says:
the mind grows weak and brittle trying to remember. but why strain, the release is easy, then the true friends come to mind

Amber says:
As soon as a friend comes to mind, Mine start to go and bind, As if to say memorys are only but an image.

Prince says:
to the mind an image yet to the heart an engraving that will never part

Amber says:
As thy will never part, To the heart of ones soul, As if one believes, The soul will live on, Passing through all who move on.

Prince says:
those that move on so cold and alone, never knowing just where to go yet always  torn between the truths they have been shown

Amber says:
As the truths are discovered, Thy move on to a new life, No memorys of meaning, Nothing resembeling there past life, But images of thy fallen,

Prince says:
though they have fallen they will once more rise. the spirit knows the truth and sees through all the lies

Amber says:
As it sees through lies, One’s fate gets known, As if de-ja-vu to the mind, One may not live without the true courage to push on

Prince says:
that courage come from deep within. dwelling but the patience is growing paper thin

Amber says:
As patience gets lower, One breaches the barrier, The soul, Once again

Amber says:
Becomes alive, As ones fate is finnaly decided

Prince says:
the decision has been made but only one can make it final. the one whos life it is to live will choose their own pathh in the end

Amber says:
As one chooses there final path, They awaken there true self, As if one as discovered life at its fullest.

Prince says:
the true self is awakened and see life to its worst, man slaying man and blood shed never ending. causing self hate and discourage to live any further

Amber says:
As one finds discourage, Thy strength depletes, The soul is lost again, In a world of banishment, As if never to be found, No memorys, Nothing

Prince says:
banished alone once again, but alone with the ones who are much like himself

Amber says:
As a rising moon, The landscape soon becomes engulfed in darkness, The trees, plants, And animals disapear as if never to reapear.

Prince says:
but the moon shines like a beacon in the midst of evil, giving hope and will to live

Amber says:
As if hope comes, Encouregement fills the air, The sun soon rises as if a new day is born, A new start, A new life

Prince says:
with every new life come opprotunity. and opprotunity a change in the future. but how long till the changes cease to exist

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