Poetry / "I do"

  One step forward, stop.
  Turn left, stop.
  Three steps forward, stop.
  Two steps back, stop.
  Turn right, stop.
  Hold my hand, and listen to my voice, stop.
  Sit down, you might want to, No? Ok stand, stop.
  Hear my call, feel my touch on you sleeve, stop.
  Feel my fingers lace your left hand, stop.
  Take off the blind fold, stop.
  Look down, stop.
  Say, “I do”, stop.
  Let our lives begin, GO!

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