Poetry / "Deep within the Darkness"

deep within the darkness
the farthest reaches of unknown

nothing here but emptiness
yet you never feel alone

why do you travel to this place
are there things that you must find

‘cuz if you’re chasing sanity
or need to free your guilty mind

it ain’t fuckin’ happenin’
so leave this place behind

i tried so hard to let you know
this ain’t no place to be

so many fucked up evil things
have happened ‘cuz of me

when you come to visit me
this i must confess

you’ll never know that you came
in my emptiness

let my hatred take it’s toll
your future is the deal

slowly strip you of your soul
yet the pain you can not feel

in ten years i’ll own you whole
and you’ll know the pain is real

your death your pain your agony
watching it is great

the day you saw my emptiness
was the day you sealed your fate

©SMRB

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Age: 49
Loc: Atascadero, CA
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