Haiku/Senryu / Cool August Night

Clear, star-filled night,
Light breeze cools late August heat,
Swoosh, heron lands home

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August 28, 2008

oknapp

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
632	78.6% (271 votes)	46.9%

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oknapp reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

You create very good scenes in your writing. What i like about your work is that a person can imagine all kinds of things happening. You write of nature, which i love. I think it says something for the writer when he can take a few short sentences and paint a vivid picture. I like to be able to get into the scene. Your stuff works for me. A good poem or work evokes the senses. Yours does that. Kudos, Sandi