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  My inner child needs a drink.

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BPL avatar General Stranger

January 17, 2009

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Funny love it !!And yes we all feel that way at some point .Good job

greenwriter avatar General Stranger

January 09, 2009

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So true I think; that inner child, who wants to be taken care, be allowed to be irresponsible, to do whatever the hell they want to do instead of what they are suppossed to do. It’s exhausting being an adult sometimes and in six worlds, this quote says it all!

le_rose avatar General Stranger

January 01, 2009

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  Hee….  I’m not sure I get it, but’s it’s making me grin. I’m thinking ‘My outer child needs a drink!’
  Cheers!

Le’Rose

Tola avatar General Stranger

December 23, 2008

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Loved it.  Yep, been there, had the counselling, felt like shite and wanted my inner child so drunk it would sleep through an earthquare.  Can offer no advice as it just says it all and says it well.  

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December 19, 2008

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Funny. I feel this way half the time no matter what.  But yes, especiall after seeing one of them.  And a cigarette.

Nice.

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December 15, 2008

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I was laughing out loud at this.
I don’t know how to recommend changes for it, tis pretty much perfect as is.
Great work! =D

Bosco avatar General Stranger

December 07, 2008

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Hello,
Good six worder, fluid and memorable.
But your inner child will need fake i.d.
B

snarfus avatar General Stranger

November 28, 2008

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Short, to the point, and very funny. I might specify the type of drink (“My inner child needs a scotch!”) but otherwise good job.

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November 17, 2008

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It made me laugh!  That always get’s at least an 8 from me.

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November 14, 2008

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lol the humor is hilarious.  i absolutely love it.  the note for reviewer was absolutely necessary.  i could easily picture this in a movie or well written book.  i am trying desperately to think of something that would make this quote better but nothing seems to come to mind. you seem to have nailed the point in your 6 words perfectly.  i’m glad i decided to read it

jm

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