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I struggled a to pull myslef out of bed for my normal 6:30 in the  morning eye opener. I was
alone in the apartment still ajusting to life after the roomates had moved out. Soon after my bedtime inducing buzz had taken its effect, i had vivid and utterly depressing dreams i dare not describe in this writing , my loves are saved for a writing all thier own.

I awoke in a sweaty half drunken daze to my ex roomate who still at least half lived their seeing how all his shit was yet out of the house. None of us wanted to be here any longer and i felt it my obligation to cronicle this event , just as any other article ive written in my life time.

I dont care much for spelling errors or fixing them , its not responbilty to give you people reason you must gain that on your own sadly. Im simply here to tell you what happened like a good journalist should , and dont you argue with the truth asshole.  

Im in no condition to finish this article im going to call someone now , see you all in the next edition.

-Marat

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effervescentpsyche avatar General Stranger

November 07, 2008

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October 31, 2008

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Well first off spelling is an issue if you wish to be published someday. I am not perfect my any means, but if you are listing your items in hopes that they will be discovered you need to spell things correctly and calling people nasty names isn’t very professional either. If your here to tell people what happened as you say like a good journalist should, then you need to be more coherent in your thoughts etc. Wow, good luck!

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Loc: Greeley, CO
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