Poetry / My Love

BEAUTIFUL FLOW. I FEEL THE LOVE IN THIS POEM. GOOD WORK.

Reconsider your introductory sentence, try to write something which captures your audience and draws them in.  Consider French “I love you” or another way to say it since you use “my love” to follow.
I feel “you’ll ever know”, although expected, sounds better rolling off the tongue.

Each day which passes sounds better.

We may not get forever…sounds strange.
Or even just tomorrow….again, this line may sound better written another way.

I love you with abandon…nicely written.
As to what tomorrow may claim…cleverly written and romantic.
Reconsider the sadness you leave the reader with.  You have written a beautful piece and with minimal revision will be masterful.  Take your time and read each sentence independently.  Consider using descriptive words of how that love really feels to you.  Go deeper than the surface.  Love is a very serious subject.
Thank you for the opportunity.

You might think about making this longer. As soon as you start to get into it, it is over. I would describe who your love is  and why you love them, more.

The clarity is good.

You have done a good job with this, just think about making it longer.

Very deep. I love your similes!