Short Story / Mike Tyson Joins the Fight Club- A skit (Analysis)

INT.  A BASEMENT

There are many men there, formed into a circle, they have no
Shirts.  It is the fight club.  Mike Tyson enters the circle.
                
                MIKE TYSON
        Hey, I want to join your “fight club”!
                
                BRUNO
        NEVER SAY FIGHT CLUB!!

Bruno goes to punch Mike Tyson.  Tyson responds by punching out
nearly everyone in the room.
                
                BRUNO
        Who invited THIS guy.

Tyson stops beating them for a moment.
                
                MIKE TYSON
        I thought you said this was a FIGHT club.  Where’s the FIGHT?
                
                BRUNO
        NEVER say FIGHT club!!

He attacks Tyson again, and is knocked out.  Tyson knocks out all but
one of the remaining people in the room.
                
                MIKE TYSON- to himself
        I LIKE this fight club.

Remaining guy standing is shaking in his boots.
                
                MIKE TYSON
        Aren’t you going to tell me not to say  ”fight club”?
                
                LAST GUY STANDING
        Man, you can say fight club as much as you want!!
                
                MIKE TYSON
        Never say FIGHT CLUB!  

He knocks the guy out, groans in the background, Tyson
smiles.
                        
                        FADE OUT.

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Far too many criteria. So let me get this straight, you want an agent, right? How could I tell? Anywho, this was ok. The joke was pretty predictable. I guess being acted out by really good actors (Damon Wayne) might make it funny, but it’s sort of stale. The writing is good and all, it’s just not a very original idea. Sorry.

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