Lyrics / "pocket full of words" (Analysis)

shit – might hit the fan
for this – son of stan
summer of runnin’ – from nothin’
shacked hobo – livin digital
stationary – unsanitory – insanity
still – time found – clutch clarity
actions – still – speak louder – reality

grasp – last chances
irish whisper – bellows still – mine frantic
my world – warped fantastic
naked – draped in zeroes and ones

still – shit will not – hit the fan
as long as – brethren be static – demographics
only – counted statistically – faceless
the pot – not so proverbial – when trapped like dumpty
up on it – can not get – off of it – irony
i own windows – and one pot to piss in – and find my mind filled – with feelings nothingly
null – not a single score to settle – discomfort in safety
ahead of me – nada obstacles – none
except obsessions – i alone – on my own – have erected

martyr nonsensical – victim – fits narcissistic
effects – causes affected
worth sweatin’ – not much – if anything
static – being -still – calmly – uneasy
still – second guesses – serenity not the enemy
mind open – reflection
heart – beat – faint – tainted – faded – still – beat – true
purpose -pure rhythmia – in lifeblood pumped – soul prompted pursuit
and why – i hide from finding what needs sought
beat – universal – love one
purpose – roadmap identified – acknowledged
life beauty – discovered unshucked – oyster undone
and to this day – still
my world – warped fantastic
naked – draped in zeroes and ones

- filthy white 04/07

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September 04, 2008

Lin

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September 02, 2008

singularity

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August 30, 2008

Anonymouse007

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An interesting and somehow musical rambling.  I enjoyed it quite a bit to tell you the truth.  As I pondered the writer, I felt somewhat a kindred spirit.  I believe it would make a great song, or coffee shop poetry reading.  It is strange that I enjoyed it that much, as it doesn’t follow the ordinary context one would expect.  I guess that’s what makes it lyrics vs. poetry.  Good work.

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August 30, 2008

by anonymous

thanks for the feedback and your spot on in my dabbling in electronically infused beats and such.

as far as the “my stuff errs to the side of spoken” was a less than articulate explanation of my words being geared more toward the audible than the legible.

the tonality and expression adds a depth of field that i hope assists listeners in grasping the intent of filthy white.

this diddy was drawn from thoughts of time wasted in the alleged rat race as well as while inebriated in front of the computer (me not naed) but the vast majority of images in my spam box.  

a general reflection on how simple and undaringlife had become at that juncture in time.

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August 30, 2008

jessica0293

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First of all, good luck with your project.
And secondly, this is quite puzzling for me. The way I see it, it’s like word association, and when I see it that way it makes more sense to me.

In your ‘notes for the reviewers’ thing:
“my stuff errs to the side of spoken hence it being categorized under “lyrics””
Huh? What’s ‘errs’? That totally threw me.

If this is ever used in a song, I can see it working with electronica. Something with synthesizers – lots of them.

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August 30, 2008

by anonymous

i’ve been redefining “left field” since conception. glad you enjoyed it and appreciate the although awkward, positive experience. (considering you “get paid” to read stuff, you made my day as i wondered  what someone credible other than pardlo would have to say about my words

September 01, 2008

by jessica0293

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loolz
i’ll admit, the title drew me in.
well done though, although confusing for me, it is interesting to read through.

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