Poetry / plasmatic

Thanks, Daddy:P
Hmmm.. You are perceptive. You seem to have women sized up pretty well.
Marvin is to blame for this. It was the poop poem that got me thinking I’d spill something about my menstrual cycle. This, however has nothing to do with men. It’s all about living in a female body. Period. :D

the last sentence of my review didn’t have anything to do with the poem. i was just sighing over Miley. she’s so dreamy!

urg.

billy ray gonna stomp you, ac!  

HM is not masturbation material, even if you’re 14.

BTW: what do you mean about half rhyming? Can you give an example? Thx again.

lovers are for losing
the contents of the uterus
not always of our choosing

now, if you lost the middle line, that would be called a half rhyme. i think. its when the poem doesn’t rhyme until the last two lines. i think. i should look it up. i think i’ll do that now.

Ya, I’m not technical about anything. By stand alone what do  you mean? It’s on it’s own line. Do you mean it should have a period? I feel weird about punctuation in poetry. For me it’s all by feel. The rhythm of it works for me even if it’s uneven but I could play with it. Mind you I wrote this very quickly. I’m not really serious about poetry it’s sort of like a fun thing to do for me vs narrative which is like giving birth. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment.

I hear you about not being the poetry type.

I posted one today for fun and I’m getting serious critiques – ack!

By stand alone I meant that there should be spaces before and after it.
Break it up from the rest of the poem.
It seems to have this one rhythm before and a new one after.  

That’s all I meant by the physical stuff.

It is fun to just blurt out stuff though isn’t it?