This is just a section of the play but yes i have written more to it i will upload bits at a time although some scenes will be missing due to copyright
Stage Play / Students scenes 1-3 (Analysis)
Act one:scene 1
Inside a classroom - Aaron is acting as the teacher trying to lecture the students about william Shakespeare while the others Nath,Dan and Joe are sitting at different corners of the room being mischievous and generally causing trouble.
Aaron: So that is why William Shakespeare is still famous today.
Nath: Sir is it true that William Shakespeare is gay!
Dan: Is he sir cos if he is then i am refusing to study anything more to do with him
Aaron: No! he was not gay there is no proof but yes all his sonnets where thought to have been written to men o.k
Nath: Yeh but that could still mean that he was Gay so i refuse to learn!
Dan: me too
Joe: Yeh and me
Aaron: (Getting frustrated) William Shakespeare is and was the best writer in the whole of English literature and i am not sure whether you are even worthy to speak his name. Let alone read and study his precious plays and sonnets.
(Bell Rings)
Aaron: now get out all of you before I do something I will regret!
Act one:scene 2
(Scene quickly changes to in the on campus rooms all of the boys share a room together, all of them are sitting in different areas of the bedroom but Dan must be standing)
Dan: So what are we all doing tonight?
Nath: Well first i am meeting my dealer to give us some more crack and then I am gagging for it so I thought maybe go to Club Essence i bet that is where all the single mums are and i bet some of them are as fit as (Fuck) {please not that if you want you can remove fuck and the line will still sound as good}
Dan: Brilliant you cant beat drink drugs and sex straight after a hard week at school
Joe: One problem we haven't got our ID
Dan but you can sort that out can't you Joe
Joe: But it can take me hours and we could get caught...........
Dan: (Grabbing Joe by scruff of his collar) But you can sort it can't you!!!!!!
Joe: (Stuttering) Yes
Dan: (Throws down Joe) Good right now while we have got all our priorities straight me,Nath and Aaron are going down to get the Crack while Joe sorts our ID our-Right
All: Right
Dan: Right then lets go before we don't get chance to go anywhere
Joe: (Muttering) I wish
Dan: What was that Joe
Joe:Nothing
Dan:Good
Act one:scene 3
(Scene yet again changes this time to a park where a shabby looking man played by Joe is waiting on the bench the others enter)
Dan:(To nath) is this the man
Nath: (Nods) Yeh that's him aright
Dan:O.k this is what we do i will go and get the drugs and while you to are just walking around once i have got them run!
Aaron: Why
Nath: Because we are not going to pay for them thicko
Aaron: Oh i get it why don't we just pay for them
Nath: Because if we do that then we won't have any money for drinks this weekend and sercurity in clubs now is tight and it is alot more risky
Aaron:I suppose your right
Nath: That's because i am always right
Aaron:Yeah whatever
Dan: Right lets get started I'm going off now you lots just act natural and walk around
(Dan goes towards the bench while the others walk around in a strange way and as funny way as possible)
Dan:Not that natural!
(Dan then goes and sits on the bench and sits next to the strange looking man)
Dan:have you got something for me?
Joe:Are you Dan who i am supposed to be meeting
Dan:Yeh that's me now give me the drugs and i will sort out the dosh
Joe:(he gives the bag to Dan) RUNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(They all run around the stage comically running into each other Joe runs around the stage like a girl eventually they have the scene to actually run off of stage but it takes Joe a while to catch on)
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PenelopeMV reviewed Version 1 -
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Seems that you cut the action right off where it was getting good and somethingwas really happening. YOu need to write more- do they get away? What then happens? PS Fuck is ok this is the 21rst century.
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LACM reviewed Version 1 -
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This is well funny great start i like the bit about william shakespeare it really made my day.I like the way you mix comedy with drama.I cant wait to treadmore of your plays well done.However if i was to add something i would add some more stage directions but a really good play
curtis_irion reviewed Version 1 -
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This seemed like it started out in a coherent manner, with some sort of definite action in mind. Have you written more on this stage play? Or was the entire play meant to encompass everything up until the point when the drugs were snatched?
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