Poetry / You Think You Can?

You know how much I love you, right?
Because from where I'm standing
It all seems to be so hard to understand,
But, you know I love you, right?
The thing is that I need you.
So, could you just hold on to me?

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September 05, 2008

daphne

REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats
daphne reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Very cliche. Not very enjoyable to read.
Too simplistic. Try express it more
the true  nature of passion for her?

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Meshek

Age: 19
Loc: Oxnard, CA
Gen: M
Last Login: October 21
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