Poetry / Untitled 2008

_{Fall into the crevices of my mind}

_{And tell me what you find}

_{The things that whisper by your ears}

_{The thoughts and emotions felt so real}

_{Close your eyes,}

_{Lay in the streams of my thoughts}

_{Tell me what you can hear}

_{And what you think is real}

_{Look past my differences}

_{See me for who I really am}

_{The person inside the mind,}

_{Not what's in front of you!}

_{Can you stand what you sense?}

_{The person you never knew I was}

_{Feel the alive I feel}

_{Tell me, can it be real?}

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September 16, 2008

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