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Student Body President... Unlikely Drug Dealer

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DaRoo avatar General Stranger

May 16, 2009

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Interesting advice.
From the words of one whom is truely regretful, no?
When you say enter this, are you refer to the entry itself??
As you did enter it on to URBIS, or perhaps I am just overanalyzing.

I like the air of mystery around it though. Well done.

Astriapo avatar General Stranger

November 26, 2008

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The first thought I had was Merriam Berry in DC.  It is, however all too true.  You never know who is doing what…

TheWind avatar General Stranger

September 24, 2008

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I can see what you are trying to do…it’s funny how some things can turn out to be different things. Maybe this would look better under “quotes”...
There’s nothing really i can say about this. You did a good job =)

emmettrose19 avatar General Stranger

September 21, 2008

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although i agree, it was kinda random and didn’t make much scence.

spiffy avatar General Stranger

September 17, 2008

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dichotomies and repressed common knowledge through intuition. It’s nice.

Kaabii203 avatar General Stranger

September 17, 2008

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I see. It’s funny how some things are just totally unexpected. Did you experience this?
I don’t think you need to capitalize all the words.
On second thought…
Yeah, you should definately keep it. It’s extra impact for what you’re trying to say. But if your quote gets too long, you cant capitalize all the words.
Just sayin.
I think this is a really great quote.
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Jimmel104 avatar General Stranger

September 17, 2008

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Not the best I’ve seen, but very, very good.
I can see this as an epitaph or a headline.

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