Poetry / 3 am Highway

3 am highway
cold and alone
no hurry to get back
no one waiting at home
radio stations
play my friend
no future beyond
the headlight’s end
maps in hand
routes carefully set
a detour sends me reeling
and I haven’t found my way yet
nothing is familiar
the broken road a torment
not sure if this, my life’s drive
is a blessing or just punishment

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allthingsconsidered avatar General Friend

July 08, 2006

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I really like this. I read it before I read the “about it” section and though I would have never guessed it was about your divorce, the pain, loneliness and lost-ness really comes through. Nice work. :)

Kredulous avatar General Stranger

April 13, 2006

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Time heals as they say.

Some nice wording there…I like it.

Good luck.

:)

thirdeyetc avatar General Stranger

March 01, 2006

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Not too bad… not too bad…

I like that it’s ambiguous enough to be able to take on new meaning once you know what it’s about. It’s simple, but I don’t think that’s necessarily a bad thing in this case. Short, and to the point. Gets across the feeling.

It’s doesn’t blow me away, but I can’t think of any good criticisms, as it serves its purpose.

Manalove121 avatar General Stranger

February 14, 2006

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It’s wonderful.  You have found a way to encapture your reader and ponder life and its endless choices.  

“not sure if this, my life’s drive
is a blessing or just punishment”

It’s seems like you were trying to get this statement in there, and the best place was last.  It fits a little off, but the words to speak volumes.

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