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Query Letter / Vrooman
Have you ever left your vehicle unattended with your GPS still on in your front window? Imagine the consequences of someone violating your space and changing your destination without your knowledge. I’ve written a 70,000-word thriller called Vrooman that I hope will keep you on the edge of your seat.
The story is set in Tulsa, Oklahoma where middle-aged, hard-working Tom Stone is having the worst day of his life. He lost his job this morning and then his cheating girlfriend dumped him over the phone this afternoon just before the two Marcia Brady look-alikes swerved in to the convenience store parking lot and dented his car while he was in it. Instead of apologizing they antagonize him, not knowing that he is about to snap. When they step away from their vehicle he changes the destination on their GPS, sending them to his neighbor’s house as a harmless prank. The prank turns deadly when the girls arrive at their new destination and witness a violent attack setting off a series of events that brings six people to the house, but only one makes it out alive.
I read in the 2008 Guide to Literary Agents that your agency is interested in thrillers. This is my first attempt at getting published and I hope that you find an interest in Vrooman as the story and the characters are unique. I am ready to send the manuscript at your request.
Thanks so much for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
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