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Lyrics / Prey
(Hook)
Always the same, your charming ways, words you say.
No, it never changes,
You alwayyyysss get your prey.
(chorus)
- whomever you set your sights on tonight
- you know is yours, they never put up a fight
- so entranced, are they, so quickly, fall prey
- hells spell for you and your demonic way
Watching you is like learning from a master.
Poor little girls intent on playing with disaster.
They know not, what demon stands before them.
Eyes barely focused on this, star studded gem.
(chorus)
You, hustle and you flow.
You, do it best, you know.
These girls don't have a chance.
Willing to do you in an instance.
(chorus)
(solo guitar riff)
Sadly, age will not instill wisdom for bad boy chasers.
Just a never ending pursuit of loveless wasters.
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Tak3thechanc3 reviewed Version 1 -
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I love the concept of this song. The lyrics have a nice flow, but they feel like they need more, more description to your song. Other than more description, I think you might have something here.
Keep up the good work!
-Walker
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pigpin reviewed Version 1 -
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hells spell for you and your demonic way; i think you could take this out and be ok. falling prey to me your master leading you to your demonic way. you would have to start the next off a little different. i like it alot,to me it is heavy metal?
ModernDayAthena reviewed Version 1 -
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Great lyrics. I’m not going to get into the mechanics of it, because when you’re singing a song, no one sees if you’ve capitalized the appropriate letters or not.
It really speaks to me- it seems like it’s being sung from a girl who, like others before her, fell prey to him, and that makes the song easy to relate to.
vibe0ne reviewed Version 1 -
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very good song. “You hustle and you know” is a great stanza. my favorite by far. The end could be like a soft talking as i see it and not so much singing.
CynicGod reviewed Version 1 -
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Great song!
I would be more impressed if the ending was a little longer though; it leaves the reader kinda in limbo.
Wendy reviewed Version 1 -
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I really enjoyed reading your lyrics for “Prey”. It was well written, it gets the message across and the story your telling. Well done! One note of advice in the area: NOTES FOR REVIEWER The creator of this item has not left any specific reviewer instructions. You might want to leave a message of what type of genre your lyrics fall under. Rock, pop, metal, melody this will help the reviewer determine the lyrics flow easier.
I look forward to reading more of your works.
fred_kane reviewed Version 1 -
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I like the theme. It’s one I return to in my writings (from the opposite perspective, but with the same message.)
gaiascully reviewed Version 1 -
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I though that this was a good idea for a song. The line “so entranced, are they, so quickly, fall prey” is a little confusing. I pretty much understand what you are trying to say but it seems rearranged and it doesn’t state your point clearly, to me anyway. I think that if you polished this that it could be very catchy. :)
cyndiratz reviewed Version 1 -
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Good set of lyrics. Sure wish I could hear the music along with them. Rarely do we hear songs about girls falling prey to the bad boys although reality dictates that. Your last set of lines ring true as many women who chase those bad boys never learn. It is like a rusted badge of honor of sorts.
Patience_is_a_virtue reviewed Version 1 -
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you approached a very cliche’ topic (girls and the bad boys) in a very unique and satisfying way. i enjoyed it. though it does leave the listener/reader wanting a bit more. it’s a little short… but that’s difficult to accurately judge on here when i can’t hear the music that it’s set with. otherwise, good job overall.
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