Poetry / Waking up in a bathtub full of ice
Waking up in a bathtub full of ice
touching stitches on my chest.
See writing on the mirror:
"Thank you for your heart."
Some party.
Sure beats living.
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Willow_Wren reviewed Version 1 -
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Hi, it’s been awhile, love this, so sick and funny, wouldn’t change a thing except I’m not sure you need the word ‘says:’ it sort of implied by the thank you phrase in quotes, perhaps a dash after mirror. Otherwise, wonderful sick humor!
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