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I am lonely, and depressed

I wonder if anyone will even remember me tomorrow.

I hear my thoughts are telling me to end my life once, and for all, but then another voice that sounds so sweet, and so pure tells me to wait it out.

I see my life drifting further, and further away from me while I'm falling in a deep dark bottomless pit with no light at the end.

I want to find people that I can relate to, but still can't find them.

I am lonely, and depressed

I pretend that I'm someone that I'm not, but I'm still terribly unhappy.

I feel as if my life has betrayed me, and that is coming to an end.

I touch the stars that get closer, and closer

I worry that my time witll be done, and I wont even get to say what I need to say.

I cry, because no one seems to understand the pain I feel inside.

I am lonely, and depressed

I understand that I am very strange, but the only thing that I ask of people is to just give me a chance.

I say that I'm not worth the space, and why am I still here.

I dream that I will one day be successful, and not just a label.

I try to cut myself even though I'm kind of afraid of death!

I hope that one day I will be understood, and that the pain will all stop.

I am lonely, and depressed.

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