Lyrics / Before I'm Forgotten

can you wake me from this daydream
I think there's a world out there
I keep waiting for it to find me
cause I'm still here

yes I'm still here

I am looking for a way to find my place
before I completely come undone
I just want a chance to state my case
before I'm forgotten

all my time spent here in my mind
working hard at getting nowhere
I keep attempting to break free
but I'm still here

yes I'm still here

I am looking for a way to find my place
before I completely come undone
I just want a chance to state my case
before I'm forgotten

I'm gonna break free
I'm gonna succeed
I'm gonna find whatever
it is I need
and when you look
you'll find me somewhere
other then here

Cause I am looking for a way to find my place
before I completely come undone
I just want a chance to state my case
before I'm forgotten

I wont be forgotten

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November 27, 2008

lookingbeyond

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131	76.3% (59 votes)	23.9%

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55	M	Scottsville, KY	July 04

lookingbeyond reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

It would be a nice one to submit to fleetwood mac ..
i like this a lot

I like your ryhme here ..

I’m gonna break free
I’m gonna succeed
I’m gonna find whatever
it is I need

You have very strong potential .

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November 14, 2008

roguescholar

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100	58.0% (50 votes)	32.4%

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35	M	Saint Louis, MO	December 31

roguescholar reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I really like this one. It has a positive undertone to it, but still keeps an honest and realistic level of life’s burdens in it. It doesn’t come across as a sappy life-affirming disney song. I’d love to hear what it sounds like with music.

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November 08, 2008

cooljim102055

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930	72.0% (375 votes)	19.2%

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54	M	Taunton, MA	November 20

cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

very good, and yes,with a postive twist throughout most of it..you state your waiting for the world to find you, then state your gonna break free…which is a bit confusing, i’d stick with the breaking away..stay postive, likeasying YOUR GONNA FIND A PLACE IN THIS WORLD AND YES I’M GONNA BE REMEMBERED!...sorry, just trying to help out..but i really think a little rewrite witrh this attitude would make it better..good luck, and i hope i helped,,,jim…and i do believe if you keep trying..you will make your place in this world..but ya gotta keep the faith and keep trying!!!!....:)..later,,,