Poetry / miss apocolypse (Analysis)

she will be fire;
tentacles and gods
play a part in it all.
soft as sin,
she's got it all.
relishing the night fall,
a vengence defiled.
liar of secrets,
Maria of the infected.
she twists her face in rapture.
she is a failure.

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November 12, 2008

mckinleycooper

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mckinleycooper reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Extremely powerful! “the night fall” I have my own imagery connected to that line, and it makes me love it all the more. “Liar of secrets” brutal and unique…

This is great poetry.

McKinley

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November 13, 2008

by plastic_angel

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thank you so much for the wonderful review. it makes me want to keep writing! i really appreciate the feedback :)

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