Lyrics / A church wedding

I can offer cold eternity.

You will freeze, but your soul will burn.

My kiss will remove you from the day.

In death you will sleep until I ask your return.

With this kiss

I, thee wed.

We will confess to no one, for we are sin.

Inpale the priest for his religion'd rules.

I'll hang his body from the rafters, then

we will bathe beneath his flowing wounds.

With this kiss

I, thee wed.

We will hunt together with eternal thirst.

The entire human race will be our prey.

In love with death we will rule the night

May blood and darkness rule their blackened days,

with this kiss.

I, thee wed

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November 17, 2008

cooljim102055

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cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi there,

well it’s sure orginal, doesn’t seem to be your typical wedding song for most to relate to, which is important for a song, but again orginal. i think i would change the title to “with this kiss”.(I wed thee) cause it’s repeated as seems to be the chorus, after each verse. people who like it will assume that is the title, and you want them to know what it is to buy it….:)...later,,jim