Lyrics / Flinch (C) (Analysis)
A heightened sense of self-importance
Unjustified
A healthy defiance of your deviance
Because you lied
Life is a stich
I pull a bag and
You grab a pinch
It's to bad the poor
Are powned by the rich
I feel the sadness when
You start to flinch
There's nothing left to destroy
Take this life like a new toy
I'll see the sign inside of Troy
Tears of blood are a little coy
A heightened sense of self-importance
Unjustified
A healthy defiance of your deviance
Because you lied
The hole in the wall
Is your downfall
My inner squall
Is on the assault
Don't insault
My intelligence
PIllar of salt
Shaken ignorance
Play it to the bone
The calcium deposits
Aren't premium to stop this
Play it to the bone
The per diem composits
Cause podium tectonics
A heightened sense of self-importance
Unjustified
A healthy defiance of your deviance
Because you lied
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It’s to bad—-too
Don’t insault—-insult?
Pillar of salt/Shaken ignorance—-love that
I’d love to hear this performed. Keep writing!
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I laughed when I read this, mostly because I did not realize the word “pwned” had been adopted into the common parlance yet. That aside, I think flow is particularly important in lyrics, and “healthy defiance of your deviance” does not seem to flow well to me. I like the idea that it is expressing, but it just does not roll off the tongue. Other than that, I like some of your clever wordplay (especially the salt one)
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