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To be good is an unnatural condition. There is no man that is born knowing what humility is, what kindness and compassion and hope and love and generosity are. These are things that must be learned. Learned through trials and through pain and through suffering; held onto every inch of the way. Good is not born, it is made.

 

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greenwriter avatar General Stranger

January 11, 2009

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Hmm. This is very succinct and well put, even though I would disagree. I would argue people are born good and that evil is created, taught, learned.  In any event, it is true I think that going through suffering can help one be a more compassionate and generous individual.

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January 10, 2009

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hi there,

i agree completely, well said…the only thing i could say that may negative about your quote…it maybe to long to be a quote..most of them are shorter and to the point..trim the fat on this one and you’ll have a winner…take care,,jimmy

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January 05, 2009

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so true. this is the formula for character. and you’ve worded it beautifully.

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January 02, 2009

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Leaving aside the philosophical debate, this is a fairly clear expression of your viewpoint.  A few picky points…  You use ‘man’ in sentence two when current convention calls for ‘person’.  You could tighten that up.  ”No person is born knowing…”  In the next sentence “These things must be…”  then connect it to the next sentence, which is actually a fragment.  ”... learned through trials, pain and suffering.  ”Held onto ever inch of the way” doesn’t make much sense in this context.  Who holds on to what?  Why?

If good is not born, neither is evil.  We must learn both.  Just something to consider.

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January 02, 2009

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In essence I might agree with you to a point but I don’t think babies are born bad or evil, I think they are born basically good and with the right nurturing they can grow up into fine human beings if taught well. All have predispositions as they grow toward some unhealthy tendencies and need to be taught caring, sharing, temper control and the like, but to say people are inherently bad is a strong statement that I may have to disagree with here, because that is what you are really saying. Some have better natures than others, some are easier than others. But human nature being what it is, we all have to learn some things the hard way and that is where I agree with you. Experience is a great teacher. I think most people are basically good at heart, it is evil that is the exception.

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