Thanks for your review. This is actually a quote, just an after-thought on the contradiction of angles rejoicing over death.
Quotes / Death Bell (Analysis)
When death's bell rings do angels really sing?
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pigpin reviewed Version 1 -
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never found a question in quotes before it is a thinker good work; the answer; for most of us
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Insomnica reviewed Version 1 -
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Hmm.
Very short, first off. And it doesn’t really say much. But I guess, how much depth can you put into an eight-word poem? It sounds more like a little jingle than an actual poem, to me at least. I guess it’s just not my style.
myownlilworld99 reviewed Version 1 -
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A splendid question derives from this quote
It inspires curiosity and a moment in which people stop and think (which is increasingly rare now a days)
well done
Willow_Wren reviewed Version 1 -
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This assumes one has a belief in angels, which is not true for everyone. It’s clever and cute but what is it really saying? Were it so, it’s kind of macabre that angels rejoice when the grim reaper comes to call. :)
Kidatheartwriter reviewed Version 1 -
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I’m not sure how to review this one. I’ve never heard of a question even in a quote, as publishable. If you had more to go with this, I’d comment more, but just a question? I know this is probably not a good review but unless you ask for more, I can’t give more. Sorry
cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 -
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hi there,
the angels better sing….:)..i like it but do you think a postive twist to it would be better than a “wonder if”...”when the death bell rings, angels start to sing”...nice one..keep writing,,,jim
Gavinswar reviewed Version 1 -
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I don’t know I like the dark nature of it but the overall question still looms. I like the feel of it though and think its good the way it is.
Gavinswar
WidowodadjiaN reviewed Version 1 -
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This quote creates the need to wonder and be pensive. People who find it worth while will actually ponder the question; aiming to find the answer within themselves. Put a comma after ‘rings’ and you’ve got yourself a nice quote.
failingsupper reviewed Version 1 -
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I like this, I find it very thought-provoking. For me it brings in a question of the polarity of death and its context. It makes me question if my view of death is appropriate on any level. The rhyming element is also a nice touch.
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