The parents pretended like they didn’t know what was going on when it came to drugs and alcohol, but when his mother walked in on him and the girl, she couldn’t pretend like she didn’t. In other words, they cared, they just didn’t know what to do about it. It seems like this reasoning is a-whole-nother story in itself.
Young Adult / Checkmate
I began fucking this skank after a drunken pilled out night at my house. My parents had gone to sleep long ago and did their best to pretend like they didn't know what was going on. My friend had passed out on the couch in the living rom leaving me and this dick magnet cuddling across from him. We hadn't as much as kissed when she stated her need to exit my presence to relieve herself in the restroom. After a couple of minutes had passed, I realized my need to use the restroom. We met halfway from the couch to the bathroom door. She made her move. Check and mate.
We made out passionately as we maneuvered each others clothes off and each of our bodies to my bed which was five to seven feet to the left. Once we arrived there, I asked if she had a condom to which she replied, "No, why? Do you have anything?" I told her the truth and than shifted her thong from her sexy hips to the floor as she removed her under-shirt. There wasn't much foreplay before she insisted I insert myself inside her.
Although I was cracked out on muscle relaxers and beer, the feeling of the walls of her vagina against the sides of my penis caused endorphins to flow from the top of my head to the tips of my toes making my body shake randomly on top of hers. As I thrusted in and out, harder and softer and harder and soft again, she screamed out my name in between moans of ecstasy. I could hardly believe my mom or dad didn’t come in to crash the party. Considering I still had to piss and the room reeked of day old fish, I was finally able to ejaculate. We had done it. We had succeeded at killing off an hour of our miserable existence.
She put her clothes back on as did I. I walked her to her car and kissed her goodbye, but it would not be the last. We had a connection, a pact if you will and time's death sentence had been sealed. We continued seeing each other for months afterwords. I told her I only wanted a monogamous relationship fearing more than one depositor could lead to a bad transaction. She agreed. By the way, the reason I wanted the relation to stay strictly sexual is because I knew it was fucked up from the start and I would be the one that got fucked over. I was right.
She took every cock that came her way. I suspected foulplay when her X kept calling and she didn't want me to talk to him. I ended up talking to him. He gave me the lowdown. We drank all of her dad's vodka and drove over to one of the boytoys house. He gave me the lowdown. I mean, I knew she was a slut, but I figured we fucked so much and for so long, how the fuck did she have time to fuck other people.
Around the unfolding of this clusterfuck, I notice what I had thought was a pimple on my dick had grown into a wart. I didn't know what to think of it at the time. My uneducated mind thought,"Hey, warts grow all over my body, why not on my penis." This was the least of my worries. My parents had kicked me out for catching me in the mydst of intercourse with this whore. I had been staying... living at her place. My mom would invite me over for dinner occasionaly and sometimes I would stay the night. I had been bouncing from their house to friends houses and back again until the harlot drew me back in.
How could I resist? Were weren't dating,( luckily, I would have had to of scrapped a lot of dudes) and she was the best bone I've ever had. She never complained about too much pain, and her keigles were amazing. Not to mention her car, a gold firebird with racing tires and rims. I, on the other hand, didn't have a secure set of wheels. My dad had bought me a car, but would take it away whenever he felt he was losing control. I also didn't have a secure roof over my head or secure food in my belly. She offered all of these things. The STD was just a bonus.
I wouldn't find out it was HPV 'til over a year later. One doctore assured me it was nothing and sent me on my way. He is still sending me a bill I refuse to pay. A doctor at a walk-in clinic in my town enlightened me. She assured me it was HPV, told me it causes cancer in men and women, and attempted to freeze what was now two warts off. The method extricated the cauliflower peak; however, the pimpleish sign of the virus is everpresent. So much for free love.
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slbynum3 reviewed Version 1 -
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Not a bad story. It shows what could happen to teens if they acted just like this person, having unprotected sex without thinking of the consequences. Some may say it’s too explicit for teens, but they need to read things like this so they can understand the reality of STDs. There are a few errors I thought i’d point out:
“I told her the truth and than shifted her thong” than should be then
“We continued seeing each other for months afterwords” afterwords should be afterwards
“I suspected foulplay when her X kept calling” I think you mean ex instead of the letter X
“My parents had kicked me out for catching me in the mydst of intercourse” mydst should be midst
“How could I resist? Were weren’t dating” – were should be we
Besides the spelling and grammer issues, I think this wasn’t half bad. Maybe you could get it published in a magazine or something for teens.
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FrakKevin reviewed Version 1 -
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Ewwww, but I liked it. It was really graphic and the perfect way to scare kids from sex. Just your description of the HPV sold me on to this. This story works for both boys and girls….mostly boys. I didnt really get why his mom kicked him out when they didnt care in the first place, but it’s no biggie. I also wish I kind of knew the age group but I predict around 17. Overall I liked this.
LexiLane reviewed Version 1 -
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-I definitely don’t think this falls into the ‘YA’ category. I understand your desire to educate the YA crowd, but I highly doubt a publisher would consider this for YA.
-That being said, I actually like how descriptive the piece is. It makes it an interesting piece to read, rather than making it feel like you’re just trying to educate people through text-book methods.
-‘pilled out’ should be ‘pilled-out’.
‘We made out passionately as we maneuvered each others clothes off and each of our bodies to my bed which was five to seven feet to the left.’ Stating the distance of the couple to the bed is superfluous and takes away from the moment a bit. I’d suggest removing it.
-It seemed like the story ended rather abruptly. I can only assume the guy never saw the girl again, but how am I to know for sure? I think it’d be beneficial to drag out the ending a bit. Does he learn to not sleep with random girls? Ever end up in a healthy relationship? We don’t know. :)
slenderpanther reviewed Version 1 -
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awesome!!!I love the way you presented this… The hard up guy, into drugs and alcohol, trying to love up on the town harlot… Its a beuatful twist on an old tale… I like also that there is no race involved brcause std’s arent racist.. kinda not diggin the curseing but hey, thats just me… It was a raw story, told to evoke strong feelings.
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