Stage Play / McFly:The Musical Act One

Act one:Scene 1

(A very expensive modern kitchen,curtains are up,the stage in darkness while the audience enter and take there seats)

House Lights Down

(It is dawn appropraite lighting should be used Jason,Harry,and Jane,are having breakfeats.There is a knock at the door it is harrys friends,Harry answers the doors and his friends enter)

Tom:Harry are you ready for school mate?
Harry:Yeah,I just need to get my things okay
Tom:Okay mate
(Harry leaves and scene changes to a pathway,it is a nice neighborhood and his friends sing “Everybody Knows”

Harry: The sun is in the sky and it is gonna be a glorious day, huh
So pour yourself a coffee, put your clothes back on and tell me your name
Now hearts are getting broken but i guess its what they call growing up, yeah
We don't expect results because the kids around here don't give a..
Tom:Nothing really matters,
Danny:nothing really matters at all
Dougie:When all your dreams are shattered, everything is beautiful
Nothing ever happens, they think we waste our lives
All:but they're wrong,
we're moving on
Harry:Everybody knows
Ensemble:You know the ships going down
Dougie:Everybody knows
Ensemble: Oooh,send the cherrys around
Danny:Everybody knows
All:We're gonna die in this town
Harry:Hey!
Danny:Wooooah
Harry:My voice is gone for screaming and my body aches from giving them hell
Ensemble:na na na na, na na na na
Dougie:You gotta know the truth that we're not in this for the cash but it helps
Ensemble:na na na na, na na na na
Tom:Nothing really matters,
Danny:nothing really matters at all
Dougie:When all your dreams are shattered, everything is beautiful
Nothing ever happens, they think we waste our lives
All:but they're wrong,
we're moving on
Tom:Yeah
Harry:Everybody knows
Ensemble:You know the ships going down
Dogie:Everybody knows
Ensemble:Yeah, send the cherrys around
Danny:Everybody knows)
All:We're gonna die in this town
[Instrumental]
All:Everybody knows
Everybody knows
Everybody knows were gonna die in this town
You know, you know!
Everybody knows
Ensemble: You know the ships going down
All:Everybody knows
Ensemble: Yeah, send the cherrys around
All:Everybody knows
Ensemble: We're gonna die in this town
Tom:Woaaaaahhhhhh woo
Dougie:Woaaaaahhhhhh hey!
Danny:Woaaaaahhhhhh woo
All:Were gonna die in this town.

Danny:Mate,why do you come to this dump when you could go to a private school which is a lot better than this place?
Harry:Well,my dad told me he doesn't want me to be treated differently just because of his success.
Danny:I know,but the teachers around here don't give a dam whether you pass or fail your exam they all think teenagers are all bad and we don't whant to learn.But at the end of the day all they care abot is there big wage packet they get every month.
Harry:I know but thats parents for you
All:Yeah
Harry:Well look on the bright side at least I got to meet you guys and my faily are going strong,(looks to the audience) well sort of.

(There is a quick black out on stage,the scene returns to the kitchen where the parents this time are arguing and fighting)

Act one:Scene 2

Jason:I'm sick of you
Jane:Well I'm sick of you!
Jason:Nothing I ever do for you is right,I tried to change,but there agin I shouldnt need to change for you,you should love me for who I am.

(They both sing “Do Ya)

Jason:Do ya do ya do ya love me
Do ya need a little time?
Do ya do ya do ya want me
Oh to hold you when you cry
Do ya do ya do ya do ya love me
Don't want to here you say maybe
Won't you tell me do you love me?
Coz I wanna know
I'm making a list of the things that I miss
Whenever we're far apart
The way that you kiss
The taste of your lips
I'm telling you from the heart
Coz baby I just wanna know
Do ya do ya do ya love me
Do ya feel it in your bones?
Do ya do ya dream about me
Oh when you're sleeping on your own
Do ya do ya do ya do ya love me
Don't want to here you say maybe
Won't you tell me do you love me?
Coz I wanna know
I'm making a list of the things that I miss
Whenever we're far apart
The way that you kiss
The taste of your lips
I'm telling you from the heart
Coz baby I just wanna know
Do ya do ya do ya love me
Do ya need a little time?
Do ya do ya do ya want me
Oh to hold you when you cry
Do ya do ya do ya do ya love me
Don't want to here you say maybe
Won't you tell me do you love me?
Coz I wanna know
Yerrr
I'm making a list of the things that I miss
Whenever we're far apart
The way that you kiss
The taste of your lips
I'm telling you from the heart
Coz baby I just wanna know
Do ya do ya do ya love me
So tell me do you love me
Tell me that you love me
Coz I wanna know
So do ya love me?
Jane:No
Jason:Don't want to here you say maybe
Won't you tell me do you love me?
Jane:No
Do you really love me?
Jane:No
So tell me do ya do ya do ya do ya love me
Jane:No
Coz I wanna know
Do ya love me?
Coz I wanna know
So do ya love me?
Coz I wanna know

Jane:Yeas,I do love you,I have always loved you It's just that
Jason:What
Jane:You have changed
Jason:Me!,I think you need to have another look through that £1000 mirror I brought you again because you are the one in this relationship that has changed and not me!I'm going to end this once and for all!

(They Both Sing Point Of View (POV))

Jason:I'm Getting tired of asking,
This is the final time,
So did I make you happy?
Because you cried an ocean,
When there's a thousand lines,
About the way you smile,
Written in my mind,
But every single word's a lie.
I never wanted everything to end this way,
But you can take the bluest sky and turn it grey.
I swore to you that I would do my best to change,
But you said it don't matter,
I'm looking at you from another point of view,
I don't know how the hell I fell in love with you,
I'd never wish for anyone to feel the way I do.
Is this a sign from Heaven,
Showing me the light?
Was this supposed to happen?
I'm better off without you,
So you can leave tonight,
'N don't you dare come back and try to make things right,
'Cause I'll be ready for a fight, yeah.
I never wanted everything to end this way,
But you can take the bluest sky and turn it grey.
I swore to you that I would do my best to change,
But you said it don't matter,
I'm looking at you from another point of view,
I don't know how the hell I fell in love with you,
I'd never wish for anyone to feel the way I do.
I never wanted everything to end this way,
But you can take the bluest sky and turn it grey.
I swore to you that I would do my best to change,
But you said it don't matter,
I'm looking at you from another point of view,
I don't know how the hell I fell in love with you,
I'd never wish for anyone to feel the way I do.
And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:I don't
Jason:And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:Don't
Jason:And you said it don't matter.
Ensemble:I don't
Jason:And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:Don't
Jason:And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:I don't
Jason:And you said it don't matter.
Ensemble:I don't
Jason:And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:Don't
Jason:And you said, and you said, and you said,
Ensemble:I don't
Jason:And you said it don't matter.
And you said, and you said, and you said,
And you said, and you said, and you said,
And you said it don't matter.

Jane:You are not thinking Straight,and as per usual you have been drinking,when is all this going to stop,I'm sorry but I have to leave for a couple of days,just to cear my head a bit.

Jane Sings “Goodbye to you”

Jane:I feel like I've been here once before
You threw my bags through the
Door and in the Road
I came home to find them on the floor
And as the rain began to poor
I got cold
And I tried to compromise
But you keep telling me all these lies
Now I don't get to say my
Last goodbyes
Goodbye to you've been wastin
All my time
Your no longer mine now
You've left me
I can't seem to get you off my mind
Thats when I realised you had me hynotized
Jason:I had you hunotized
Why am I now living on my own
She keeps inviting people home all the time
Why am I still paying for her phone
When all the luxuries she owns should be mine
Now I start to wounder why
You shrug me off when I say hi
You treat me so bad
Despite how hard I try

Goodbye to you've been wastin
All my time
Your no longer mine now
You've left me
I can't seem to get you off my mind
Thats when I realised you had me hynotized
Jason:I had you hynotized
Jane:Boy you can't hold me back no more
Your not even worth me writing lyrics for
We had something good together
Do you think you were being clever
To throw me out in awfull weather
How do I forget you now
I can't get you off my mind
That's when I realised you had me hypnotized
Danny:I had you hypnotized
Jane: Goodbye to you've been wastin'
All my time
Your no longer mine now
You've left me
I can't seem to get you off my mind
That's when I realized you had me hypnotized
Jason:I had you hypnotized

Jason:Fine if you don't want to be with me then ill go and pack your clothes
(Jane starts to cry while Jason goes off stage)
(Harry Enters)
Harry:Whats the matter mom?
Jane:It's just that son,your fathers in a mood at the moment and I need a break from him,and if you want to come with me then thats fine
(Throws down the bags at Jane)
Jason:Go on take my son away from me aswell why dont you
Harry:Your not splitting are you?
Jane:Not exactly
Jason:Yes we are and now decide if your staying with me or going with your mother.
Jane:You know how your father gets after a drink don't you Harry
Harry:Dad you told me that you stopped-you promised me!
Jason:It's only a drop
Harry:You let me down dad-I'm going with mom
Jason:Fine go with your mother you ignorant boy-with that attitude you will never get anywhere in life-you are no longer my son!
Jane:Harry go and get some of your stuff
Harry:O.K I'll be done in a min the sooner we get out of here the better!
(There is a knock at the door ,It is Rodger Nogood:Jasons manger)
Rodger:Can I come in?
Jane:Don't no i am no longer a part of this household
Rodger:Surly you don't mean that
(Both Jane and Rodger are flirting each other throughout this scene)
Jason:What do you want?
Rodger:I have got a new single for you it's called five colors in her hair,here listen to this demo
(he puts the CD in a CD player)
Five colors in her hair has been pre recorded by another cast member

CD:Do do do do doo doo,
Do do do do do doo doo,
Dodo do do do doo.
Shes got a lipring and five colors in her hair
Not into fashion but I love the clothes she wears
Her tattoo's always hidden by her underwear
But she don't care...
Every body wants to know her name
I threw a house party and she came
every one asked me 'who the hell is she?'
That werido with five colors in her hair
Jason:I hate it I'm not singing that crap!
Rodger:But its fantastic!
Jason:Its crap,what inspired you,oh let me guess the little bitch standing over there. Well I'll admit that she is a weirdo but that's the best part of the song the rest is crap!I refuse to record and release that single!
Rodger:It is the best music i have got my hand on
(Harry enters)
Jane:Come on son lets get out f here before something kicks off!

Act One:Scene 4
(The Scene changes to a council flat where Jane and harry live. It is a run down flat and you can here the TV from next door. It looks a mess with old decoration and not much furniture and what is there is broken and torn)

They both sing Room On The Third Floor

Room on the third floor
Not what we asked for
I’m not tired enough to sleep
One bed is broken,
Next room is smoking,
Air conditioning’s stuck on heat.
Outside it's raining,
There’s a guest upstairs complaining bout the room that’s got the TV to loud,
'Cos its times like these remind me
That I gotta keep my feet on the ground

Harry:Wake up early
Round 7:30
Housekeeper knocking on my door
Jane:Do not disturb sign
The back of her mind
I must’ve left it on the floor
Harry(Yeah)
My eyes are hurting
The cheap nylon curtains
Let the sunlight creep in through from the clouds
Jane:Cos at times like these remind me
That I gotta keep my feet on the ground

Both:Na na na na
Na na na naaaa
Na na na na
Na na na naaa
'Cos its times like these remind me
'Cos its times like these remind me
'Cos its times like these remind me
Harry:That I gotta keep my feet on the ground
Both:Na na na na
Na na na naaa
Na na na na
Na na na naaa
Harry:'Cos its times like these remind me
Jane:Times like these remind me
Harry:'Cos its times like these remind me
Jane:Times like these remind me
Harry:Cos its times like these remind me
Both:That I gotta keep my feet on the ground

Harry:Couldn't e get anything better with all of dads money?
Jane:Look Harry I can't get no money off of your dad until our divorce is final. The only income i get at the moment is my job of a secretary for your dad. And i think I've got the sack from that,don't you? And apart from that all i have got is child befits!
Harry:Oh
Jane:But,put it this way at least we don't have your dad moaning about your behavior and also stop letting you from having house parties. As long as I k now when you are holding one than by all means go ahead and throw a part for all your mates
Harry:Are you sure mom,I mean parties can be dangerous especially teenage ones with all of the sex and drugs
Jane:Well son we should fit in around here then wouldn't we. Son you go and enjoy your childhood because it wont last forever!
(Harry makes a sign of excitement)
Jane:Anyway Harry I'm going to nip to the shops OK
Harry:Yeah,okay mom ,ill set up the laptop and speak to my friends on MSN
Jane:Why don't you invite them around and I'll pick up pizza on the wy back
Harry:Thanks mom you're the best.

Act One:Scene 5

(The Scene changes to a bust town Rodger is looking in the window of a CD shop when Jane enters he stares at here and follows her every move)

He sings obviously

Recently I've been
Hopelessly reachin
Out for this girl
Who's out of this world
Believe me
She's got a boyfriend
He drives her round the bend
Cause he's 23
He's in the marines
He'd kill me
For so many nights now
I find myself thinkin about her now ohhh
Cause obviously she's out of my league
But how can I win
She keeps draggin me in
And I know I
Never will be good enough for her
No no
I never will be good enough for her
Gotta escape now
Get on a plane now
Yeah
Off to LA
And that's where i'll stay
For two years
Put her behind me
Ensemble:(Put her behind me)
Rodger:And go to a place where she can't find me ohhh
Cause obviously she's out of my league
I'm wastin my time
Cause she'll never be mine
And I know I
never will be good enough for her
No no
I never will be good enough for her
She's out of my hands
And I never know where I stand
Cause I'm not good enough for her
Good enough for her (x6)
Cause obviously she's out of my league
I'm wastin my time
Cause she'll never be mine
And I know I
never will be good enough for her
Cause obviously she's out of my league
But how can I win
She keeps draggin me in
And I know I
never will be good enough for her
Cause obviously she's out of my league
I'm wastin my time

Cause she'll ne-ver be mine
And I know I
never will be good enough for her
No no
I never will be good enough for her

Jane:Oh,hi rodger
Rodger:Hi Jane
Jane:How did it go with Jase
Rodger:Well,he was right you did inspire m with your fantastic hair and tatoos
Jane:Are you trying to get into my pants Rodger
Rodger:Might be,lets go round my house and find out shall we.
Jane:What 'bout Harry I told him I'll bring his food around.
Rodger:Forget about him,He's a teenager and I bet he's there now smoking something he should't
Jane:Harry's like like that Rodger
(Rodger picks her up like a brides life after a wedding)
Jane:Arh Rodger let me down (laughing at the same time)

Act One:Scene 6

(The scene changes bach to Harry and Jann'e flast,Harry has invited his friends aaround already)

Harry:(Speaking to himself)Hurry up mom I'm starving.I wounder where she is
Dougie:Maybe she went to your dads to try and sort things out.
Harry:Yeah,I hope so ,I don't want to see my family surgirng everytime i see one of them in the street and also the amount of press they will get (Sighs)
Dougie: Yeah,I know about that
Harry:Your parents arn't famous are they?
Dougie: No but they are divorced
Harry:Well I can't wait no longer I'm going to order pizza myself (He speaks to the telephone asking for pizza)
Danny:Hey mate,I wish i had a mom like yours who tells me to have parties!
Tom:Yeah,It must be great living with her,like living with your best mate
Harry:It is trust me,but i don't know of it will wind my dad up
Danny:To be honest mate,i woudnt care he told you he didnt want to be anyhing to do with you so you know...
Harry:Yeah,your right,so when should me throw my fist ever teenage party
Tom:Nwxt week maye
Danny:Wednesday
Harry:No satuday so we don't have to drag our self out of bed for school the next day
Tom:Danny:True
Harry:Lets invite the whole of the year over,My mom will get in the booze and I suppose she will stay at a friends for the night or something
Danny: Yeah,fantasic! Never know we might even lose it
Dougie:Lose what?
Harry:Our viginty stupid
Dougie:Oh yeah
(Knock at the door)
Dougie:Thats sounds like the pizza

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March 10, 2009

Schyler

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Schyler reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

overall it was pretty awesome, but try to be more specific in your scenes. i think everything happened a little too fast and you should probably slow things down. since you ended with the fifth scene the reader should get a glimpse of the mother’s, father’s, and harry’s personality. you got few spelling mistakes ..and…hm….oh! you should also describe the characters expression like, for example….:

Danny: (speaking with excitement) Yeah! Fantastic! Never know, we might even lose it!
Dougie: (dumbfounded) Lose what?
Harry: our virginity stupid (-_-) <-—- i dont know how to describe that fascial expression so yeah..