Poetry / Winter Queen

Oooh, I love the image. The wording is accurate and precise. It just sounds like it was meant to be. The Winter Queen is such a powerful image of a lover lost. My favorite verse is the one when you describe that there is no warmth in your future dreams together. Beautiful portrayal for such a short poem.

It’s sad…  I wanna cry, but I dont know how for, the queen with the mysteriness of the ending of the relationship, or the writer, who fights over his feelings.

It’s written very well, I’m not sure if there is an error here…  ”In together-future dreams.” for some reason, it just seems alil off.

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February 20, 2006

by bogert8609

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I mashed together-future because I wasn’t sure what was colder, a future without her or a future together with her.  When I wrote it, both seemed bleak and I wanted to try to convey that in a single line.  I guess I meant it to be read as either or, or both at the same time.

February 20, 2006

by Manalove121

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It works both ways.  Life has tough choices, and sometimes all the choices are quite bleak.

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