Poetry / Largest hole in the heart

The feeling of your whole body being shattered when you hold something you once loved starts to disappear into the void of death.
The gradual deaths of your heart as you see the life of your dearest friend leaving you.
The fountains just start and you can not turn them off no matter how hard you close your eyes.
His last breathe seems to end your world.
At the end it just feels like the world hates you and is doing this just because it can.
I will miss you my greatest friend, because you took the biggest part of me when you left.
 

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