Limericks / Dont Lie

There once was a boy named Luke,

Who's scar on his face was a fluke

He says he got in a fight

Although he says it with mite,

He was bit by a poodle named Duke.

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August 17, 2009

AbigailRuth2009

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April 09, 2009

ScottBJohnson

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ScottBJohnson reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

This one is pretty clever. Your syllable count is off though. It should be 9-9-6-6-9. Yours is 8-8-7-7-9. Also, “Who’s” should be “Whose” and “mite” should be “might”.

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April 05, 2009

Alexandra1995

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Alexandra1995 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

THis was indeed a funny poem. The only problem I saw with it was the word “mite” in the fourth line. The spelling if I am not mistaken should be “might”