Lyrics / Sooo Amused

Hook:

Here's some news, unaware, you lose, me.. I"m soooo amused.

You fell for sure, still you lied, alluding to your wicked pride.

Left us hanging, by a thread of hope, dangling without rope.

Exalted we held you, such talent, passion and all day thrashin'.

You did it to us all you know, me, her, them... and soooooo

chorus:

Hope you had fun, the likes of which there's no compare

around the bend, hooves barreling down, fair is fair

for the seeds you sowed and still sprinkle to grow

are anxiously waiting for their brother reap to show.

No escape for you, not now or ever....weren't you clever.

All portrayed as something we're not...your lies we bought.

Scars though healed, still shine bright...even in darkest light.

Me, I'm learning and letting go...not inclined to be your hoe.

chorus

Yes, here's some news, unaware YOU LOSE... me, I'm sooo amused!

Reviews

April 26, 2009

s8141523

REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats

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19	M	Canada	October 10

s8141523 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

This song was pretty good. One thing I would suggest is keeping the chorus either the exact same, and have it repeat twice in the song to make it catchy. Or have the same chorus construction (number of sentences) to ensure the reader and (If it ever gets recorded as a song) the audience can stick with it.

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April 27, 2009

by sagittarius1212

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42	F	United States	November 14

Thank you for your review. The chorus is the same but you are saying have ir repeat twice in a row? Thanks again, Donna

April 30, 2009

by s8141523

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19	M	Canada	October 10

Ahhh, I was confused by the chorus. It seems I merely was not paying enough attention. Apologies.

May 09, 2009

by sagittarius1212

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42	F	United States	November 14

No problem…thank you for taking the time to review this!!!

Donna

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April 21, 2009

cooljim102055

REVIEW QUALITY: 100.0%(1 vote ) personal info reviewer stats

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54	M	Taunton, MA	November 20

cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

hi,

i think this would make a very good metal song…i like the trashin/passion ryhme, and i like the song structure..v/c/v/c..it’s popular and successful…in the negative side, you didn’t mention the title in the chorus, which should be mention..even twice, since it’s repeating..you want to make it memorable and let people know the title of the song when they go to BUY it….:),,,in general, with a little rework, i think you got some thing nice, for a metal song…take care,,jim

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April 25, 2009

by sagittarius1212

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42	F	United States	November 14

Thanks Jim, I will rework and include the title in the body of the song. Thanks for your review.

Donna

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