Poetry / It's Not

Love is not selfish or cruel.
It’s the scissors of vanity
that slices through the caring bonds.

Love is not lazy, offensive, or weak.
It’s vanity that cuddles comfort’s
exaggerating dreams.

It’s not love that breaks hearts.
Love is a blessing; love is pure glee.
But, we are surrounded by countless imitations
that often love lives only as a dream.

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June 13, 2006

KatieDub226

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KatieDub226 reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I had to read the last 2 lines a few times before I got what you were saying. Consider inserting “such” before “by countless imitations.”

Beautifully written. It’s nice to see someone not blaming love for everything.

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February 20, 2006

layla

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layla reviewed Version 1 - Read 100%% of the Item

I like the hopeful sentiment this conveys.Your words dance beautifully.

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February 20, 2006

by alexandro

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thanks for the comment, I’m new here, I’ll check out your material.

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