Poetry / Writing this

Writing this,

I realize 

 

that It will be

 

revised,

 

ripped,

 

rewritten,

 

stressed over,

 

cursed at,

 

incinerated,

 

mocked,

 

thrown away,

 

laughed at,

 

stabbed,

 

talked to,

 

and serve

 

as a continual

 

source of 

 

frusturation--

 

All in just

 

one day.

 

And yet

 

perfect

 

anyway.

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FrakKevin avatar General Stranger

April 23, 2009

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FrakKevin reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Dang, I was actually really enjoying this. But because of the spacing and bad Urbis glitches I wasnt able to click next page for the rest of the poem.

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