Stage Play / The Chaos Creed
Eliminate all who stand in our way;
Hooray-Hooray, it is the Final Day;
Burn everything in sight is how we play;
Hooray-Hooray, it is the Final Day;
Destroy the others that's what we'll do;
Nothing is what the others can do;
No one knows of our plan to coup;
Nothing is what the others can do;
We rule the world, it's the Final Day;
Victory is ours, Hip-hip-hooray.
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Eliminate all who stand in our way;...those rolls off the tongue better, believe it or not “art” feels forced.
Burn everything in sight is how we play;..fantastic and powerful statement!
Hooray-Hooray, it is the Final Day;...consider eliminating this 2nd repeat. Consider something like: No chance for truce it will end OUR way.
We rule the world, it’s the Final Day;...consider and it ends this way or our way, or get down and pray…etc…,
Victory is ours, Hip-hip-hooray!!!...add excitement…an exclaimation point for enthusiasm, thank you for the opportunity.
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If this selection was/is intended to be a part of a staged play, I can imagine someone doing this as a monologue. Very creative word usage. I would love to know the back story of this piece and where things take off from there.
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